Apple ipod

Please correct my English sentence natural?

I try to say the following. "After (when?) Miscellaneous (many? Enough?) Applications (software?) Android Smartphone better (will be available? Developed?), The iPhone would lose its market share in January. (Or iPhone finally face competitors right?) "Please show me how natural language to say the phrase above. Thanks in advance

What would you say: "When final (or, in time), after several updates, the Android smartphone can be improved enough to give a strong competition from the iPhone. "

Droid Smart Phone Competes with iPhone